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Months grouped together like careless footsteps
stroll upon the lashings accorded to me by the sun.
In January I am caressed by ghosts
or something as cold and invisible.
They intrude upon hair, clothes; books
dampen with monstrous hand prints.
    Are these shells of half-dead creatures
    holding themselves, ancient in a cavern somewhere
    or tethered to the earth by thought?

Bits of cloud, the flesh of heaven
picked off like a soft disease
nestle on my shoulder as if pulled from my sweater.
they emerge quietly like droplets of blood. Whisper:
          we are the teeth of ancient things.

White drift presses upon the house
and the window. Its cool breath scales
my chin, pries open my mouth like a tenacious lover,
and settles with a small sigh on the tongue
like a hiss of steam.
        We have made and unmade warmth.

Angry flakes brandish their sharp
edges in a dance of swords as they tumble,
and the sigh on my tongue becomes a shriek
as they meet flesh and disappear--
The last dying things of winter.
©2008-2009 ~Roulle
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Daily Deviation, 2008-03-21

Daily DeviationSnow by ~Roulle is a sensuous reaction to winter. A fresh and exciting nature poem. (Featured by `lovetodeviate)

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Absolutely beautiful! =O

I love the imagery in the second and third stanzer the most. Lovely lovely lovely :heart:

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Sanity is calming, but madness is much more interesting

does that make me the most interesting person here? o___O
"Bits of cloud, the flesh of heaven"

I love that. Gorgeous poem.

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Of course I'm out of my mind. It's dark and scary in there.
this is great :heart: :glomp:
^^ very nice i was captured by it inmediatly :)

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Your own personal demon Adai :fuzzydemon:
Absolutely stunning way of describing something that is often too cliched because of its familiarity.

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"And in a shroud of darkness, Grammar Woman jumped through the air, leaving nothing but a sparkling cloud of punctuation marks in her wake." ~A-S-m-i-t-h
Beautiful poem, I can almost hear someone reading it outloud, but very softly.....
I adore this.

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"For three years I had roses."

"I am afraid growing up means dying a little inside"
that is .......wow, i cant even descrice how this makes me feel......very articulate and wonderful use of imagery
This is really cool. I especially like the third stanza. Beautiful words, all.

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Care to share some blood?



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awesomeness!! =P

great immagery....

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everything that is good is either: immoral, illigal, or fattening.

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